Re: PAB [Fwd: DNSO Important update: The "Merged" Draft]

["William Allen Simpson" <wsimpson@greendragon.com>]

Based on the wording suggestions so far today, here's what I have:

Current:
    4.  Registrars: a DNSO member who is a registrar of
    generic/global or country-code TLDs (defined as an entity with a
    direct contractual relationship with a registry as defined
    below),

    5.  Registries: a DNSO member who is a DNS Top Level Domain
    ("TLD") registry (defined as an entity with write authority to a
    zone referenced by a TLD),

Replacement:
    2.  Registries: a DNSO member who is a DNS Top Level Domain ("TLD")
    registry, defined as an entity that regularly publishes the
    authoritative zone file for the TLD zones which have been delegated
    to it by {ICANN};

    3.  Registrars: a DNSO member who is a registrar of generic/global
    or country-code TLDs, defined as an entity authorized by {ICANN}
    with direct update priviledges for a TLD registry zone file as
    defined above;

Do we have consensus among ourselves on this wording?  Who should propose
this to the drafters of DNSO?

WSimpson@UMich.edu
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